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Bakaneko93
04-20-2008, 06:44 PM
It had to happen, did it not? Another new project by me, even despite the fact that I have left so many unfinished. Regardless of my previous track-record, however, I'm really quite happy with how this coaster is shaping out. Now, I'll let you know, it is not finished yet. But, it's far enough along that I feel comfortable enough posting it; and, watching the coaster be slowly completed is just my type of "exclusive." :wink: Now, with the talking done, let us get on with the actual project, shall we?

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-1.jpg

Situated somewhere in Japan, (Not quite sure where or why,) Naomi is a unique little coaster that gives you a surprising feel of tranquility while, at the same time, thrilling even the worst thrill-junkie. Though it has few inversions, and never does top 60mph, Naomi will still leave you wanting more. :wink:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-2.jpg

The picture above gives you a good feel of how the coaster is laid out; along with the surrounding landscape. As you can plainly see, only a few portions of the terrain are currently themed, but I do assure you that the themeing will come in due time. I've completed the basic landscaping and supporting already, (And have nearly finished placing the footers,) with more soon on it's way.

Supernova
04-20-2008, 07:23 PM
Interesting....I like the layout and the terraforming! But, take a look at the supports supporting the chain lift and see that they're not attached to the footers!

deathfearsnone
04-20-2008, 10:27 PM
this looks promising

Ice101
04-21-2008, 12:19 AM
Bakaneko, that is so purtyful! The first pic looks great. Reminds me of NF's Blizzard.

Marc0o0o0o
04-21-2008, 12:30 AM
Woah! That looks very nice! You're quickly becoming into one of the best coaster creators of RCT3!

Doug
04-21-2008, 08:24 AM
It looks really good, but I don't like the pool spiral staircase on the brake run. It looks really odd. And like Nova said, the footers are a bit off in some places.

infiniteblue
04-21-2008, 10:30 AM
I love the layout of the coaster. The inversions look very nicely laid out, and it seems as though the coaster never lets up. It does indeed look like a thrill-a-minute ride! I do agree that the pool staircase looks a little out of place, and some supports are a bit off, but overall the coaster looks very nice.

Adamb241
04-21-2008, 10:51 AM
Amazing! Your picture taking skills are amazing! Now about the ride....even more amazing. The scenery and the trees are very well placed.

Gimmos244
04-21-2008, 01:22 PM
Great pictures and layout! This looks very promising!

Fbh007
04-21-2008, 07:12 PM
Wow! This coaster looks awesome!
I think it is your best,sincerely...

Bakaneko93
04-25-2008, 03:30 PM
Interesting....I like the layout and the terraforming! But, take a look at the supports supporting the chain lift and see that they're not attached to the footers!


That is partially due to the angle at which the picture was taken. As you zoom out, the footers seem to become less and less viewable. However, I've swapped the placement of a few footers, so that it is considerably less noticeable. :wink:


this looks promising


Thank you, then, I hope I will not disappoint.


Bakaneko, that is so purtyful! The first pic looks great. Reminds me of NF's Blizzard.


It should, as I borrowed the lift hill and drop from that particular coaster. The rest of the ride was created by me, obviously, but it still bares a resemblance to Blizzard, does it not?


Woah! That looks very nice! You're quickly becoming into one of the best coaster creators of RCT3!


Well, thank you for the complement, Marco! I'm quite glad to hear that, although I'm pretty sure that you'll find better projects out there. :wink:


It looks really good, but I don't like the pool spiral staircase on the brake run. It looks really odd. And like Nova said, the footers are a bit off in some places.


Thank you; The steps have been replaced, and the footers have been rearranged.


I love the layout of the coaster. The inversions look very nicely laid out, and it seems as though the coaster never lets up. It does indeed look like a thrill-a-minute ride! I do agree that the pool staircase looks a little out of place, and some supports are a bit off, but overall the coaster looks very nice.


Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment! Personally, I've never been one to add a lot of inversions to my rides, so I'm quite happy with how this one has turned out. (It only has three inversions, I don't recall if I said that yet. :tongue:)


Amazing! Your picture taking skills are amazing! Now about the ride....even more amazing. The scenery and the trees are very well placed.


Thank you, I'm very happy to hear that you like it! Believe me, the foliage is not easy to place; especially considering I've been placing them one-by-one. Nevertheless, though, I think that it's quite worth it. :smile:


Great pictures and layout! This looks very promising!


Thank you, and as I said before, I do hope that it shan't be disappointing.


Wow! This coaster looks awesome!
I think it is your best,sincerely...


Thank you; and you're probably quite right. :wink:

Construction continues, even in the rain...

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-4.jpg

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Ethan
04-25-2008, 03:37 PM
That helix is perfect, love the themeing!

deathfearsnone
04-25-2008, 03:43 PM
wahoo your still working on this looks magnificent

Doug
04-25-2008, 04:29 PM
Still looking good! Just promise me you took out that pool staircase...

Fbh007
04-25-2008, 04:54 PM
Great shot!

Supernova
04-25-2008, 08:45 PM
Nice, Bakaneko? Is there any specific reason for the lack of red trees?

Ethan
04-25-2008, 09:00 PM
^ I really don't think they would look very good, the red trees in RCT3 are insanely bright.

Supernova
04-25-2008, 09:01 PM
^ I really don't think they would look very good, the red trees in RCT3 are insanely bright.


Really? I disagree, I think they would compliment the coaster, but it's Bakaneko's choice!

ndawg426
04-26-2008, 07:27 AM
Looks great, Bakaneko! I like the supports on the lift hill, really nice.

:biggrin:

The Namer
04-26-2008, 07:34 AM
To be fair, i don't think red tree's would actually do this coaster any good, as DZ mentioned, that helix is already perfect

Nethero
04-26-2008, 07:40 AM
Nice, Bakaneko? Is there any specific reason for the lack of red trees?


As Meerkat says. Don't use yellow and red trees together with green trees cause the yellow and red ones are in early autumn while the green ones are in late summer. This coaster doesn't need anything more at the moment for it to look better.

deaconnor
04-26-2008, 11:58 AM
Wow this is great. Really looks good.

Bakaneko93
04-26-2008, 06:39 PM
That helix is perfect, love the themeing!


Thank you, that particular style of helix theming is my personal favorite. :smile:


wahoo your still working on this looks magnificent


Of course I am! I was only without an update for a day or two! :icon2:


Still looking good! Just promise me you took out that pool staircase...


Indeed I did, no worries. :wink:


Great shot!


Thank you, Fbh. :noob:


Nice, Bakaneko? Is there any specific reason for the lack of red trees?



^ I really don't think they would look very good, the red trees in RCT3 are insanely bright.




^ I really don't think they would look very good, the red trees in RCT3 are insanely bright.


Really? I disagree, I think they would compliment the coaster, but it's Bakaneko's choice!



To be fair, i don't think red tree's would actually do this coaster any good, as DZ mentioned, that helix is already perfect




Nice, Bakaneko? Is there any specific reason for the lack of red trees?


As Meerkat says. Don't use yellow and red trees together with green trees cause the yellow and red ones are in early autumn while the green ones are in late summer. This coaster doesn't need anything more at the moment for it to look better.


The reason that they were excluded is much the same as Nethero's answer; though it was in my original plan to include them in the landscape, to represent springtime cherry trees, I found them too bright and contrasting to fit in well. If RCT3 had a slightly duller, or lighter hue to them, I believe that they would befit the coaster better. Here's an example, regardless, so that you may make your own decisions:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-5.jpg

I included the yellow trees to add some color and interest, to replace the overbearing red.


Looks great, Bakaneko! I like the supports on the lift hill, really nice.

:biggrin:


Thank you, I'm quite proud of them!


Wow this is great. Really looks good.


I thank you, Deaconner, I'm very happy to hear that. :biggrin:

Supernova
04-26-2008, 06:41 PM
In my opinion, with the yellow included, I think the red trees look good. And so does the coaster. Nice picture.

Ethan
04-26-2008, 06:55 PM
Looks nice actually!

Question: Where is the spiral stair case from?

Bakaneko93
04-26-2008, 06:57 PM
Question: Where is the spiral stair case from?


Vodhin's Girders & Glass; you need to make sure that it's the updated version. :smile:

Ethan
04-26-2008, 07:01 PM
^ Thanks :smile:

Fbh007
04-26-2008, 09:02 PM
My constructive critism may probably come late but I think you should make most creative supports.ATH's and Jcat's supports are a little too basic.Adita's supports were creative,maybe something similar like these ones? BTW,it's my opinion,probably not yours.From what I see now,Naomi looks your best:Beautiful color scheme,amazing landscaping,awesome layout,great supportwork.
Keep it up Baka,can't wait to see more!

Nethero
04-27-2008, 03:14 AM
Question: Where is the spiral stair case from?


Vodhin's Girders & Glass; you need to make sure that it's the updated version. :smile:


I tried that, but the link he gives us always blanks out on me. Could you give me a direct download link? Thanks

I'm probably not going to give constructive critisism until this is done. But try checking out my tutorial in the tutorial section.

Bakaneko93
04-27-2008, 08:06 AM
^ Thanks :smile:


You're quite welcome, -DropZone-. :smile:


In my opinion, with the yellow included, I think the red trees look good. And so does the coaster. Nice picture.


I shall keep that in mind, then, Supernova. :smile:


My constructive critism may probably come late but I think you should make most creative supports. ATH's and Jcat's supports are a little too basic. Adita's supports were creative,maybe something similar like these ones? BTW, it's my opinion, probably not yours. From what I see now, Naomi looks your best: Beautiful color scheme, amazing landscaping, awesome layout, great supportwork.
Keep it up Baka,can't wait to see more!


Actually, albeit it's a bit subtle, I believe that the supports are unique becuase I'm not using Moby's Steel Jungle. Your standard supports for these coasters are the "Hyper Duel Steel" supports, and by creating my own version of them using the inverted supports as a base, I've actually made a new style of supporting. But, this is just my opinion. :tongue:


I tried that, but the link he gives us always blanks out on me. Could you give me a direct download link? Thanks

I'm probably not going to give constructive critisism until this is done. But try checking out my tutorial in the tutorial section.


http://98.130.102.38/e107/download.php?view.392

Actually, I'd much prefer the critisism now, rather than later. This way, I can make changes to the coaster according to it without having to re-tool the entire thing.

Fbh007
04-27-2008, 09:13 AM
Actually, albeit it's a bit subtle, I believe that the supports are unique becuase I'm not using Moby's Steel Jungle. Your standard supports for these coasters are the "Hyper Duel Steel" supports, and by creating my own version of them using the inverted supports as a base, I've actually made a new style of supporting. But, this is just my opinion. :tongue:They are nice and realistic,I have no problems using them.That'd be most creative.

Nethero
04-27-2008, 12:01 PM
Actually, albeit it's a bit subtle, I believe that the supports are unique becuase I'm not using Moby's Steel Jungle. Your standard supports for these coasters are the "Hyper Duel Steel" supports, and by creating my own version of them using the inverted supports as a base, I've actually made a new style of supporting. But, this is just my opinion. :tongue:

People have been doing that for a while. I even suggested it in my tut.

Actually, I'd much prefer the critisism now, rather than later. This way, I can make changes to the coaster according to it without having to re-tool the entire thing.

Thanks for the link :smile:

The reason I can't give critisism now is that right now I can saw about a few things, but those things are going to change once the project is more complete. I can say that you should just use fat tubes for the track leading to the chain lift rather the A frame.

Bakaneko93
04-28-2008, 04:44 PM
They are nice and realistic,I have no problems using them.That'd be most creative.


What would be? Using the remaining ones, or creating an entirely new set..?


People have been doing that for a while. I even suggested it in my tut.

Thanks for the link :smile:

The reason I can't give critisism now is that right now I can saw about a few things, but those things are going to change once the project is more complete. I can say that you should just use fat tubes for the track leading to the chain lift rather the A frame.


Well, regardless of whether they have or not, I haven't seen them. So, please allow me to be somewhat insolent; I rather like to keep them. :wink: Still, I suppose that I can try a few different versions, if you're insistent on it. :smile:

--------Update-

I don't have much energy at the moment, so please forgive me if I do not end up posting too much in the way of descriptions. At any rate, the theming continues:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-8.jpg

Here we have an overview of the area. If you look towards the back, you'll see just where most of this update's theming has gone.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-6.jpg

I've created a sort of border watchtower, though it resembles a Nobleman's castle/manor in many ways, not including it's size.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-10.jpg

Here we have another overview, this from the top Naomi's lift.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-9.jpg

And, acting as the ever-present eye-candy shot, a picture showing the fountain that was added to the helix pond.

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Ethan
04-28-2008, 05:23 PM
I love that building! Great work!

Fbh007
04-28-2008, 05:54 PM
They are nice and realistic,I have no problems using them.That'd be most creative.


Everthing is fine,never mind.
Nice update.

chevelleROCKER
04-28-2008, 06:25 PM
Wow! That looks great! Can't wait for an update!

Nethero
04-28-2008, 06:36 PM
I'm also liking that building up there. Though now I'm wondering on what the actual theme of the ride is.

I think you should vary the rock types more. You are currently using the black rock and the Snowy rock types. You might want to mix in some lighter rock a little at the top and mix more lighter rock down at the bottom.

Bakaneko93
04-28-2008, 07:06 PM
I love that building! Great work!


Thank you, -DropZone-! I'm glad you like it also. :wink:


Everthing is fine,never mind.
Nice update.


*laughs* You're confusing me now. Hah, anyway, thank you. :smile:


Wow! That looks great! Can't wait for an update!


I'm glad to hear that you think so; an update will be arriving in a day or two. :smile:


I'm also liking that building up there. Though now I'm wondering on what the actual theme of the ride is.

I think you should vary the rock types more. You are currently using the black rock and the Snowy rock types. You might want to mix in some lighter rock a little at the top and mix more lighter rock down at the bottom.


Well, "Naomi" is a Japanese name meaning "Beautiful one." I fell in love with the name, and decided to theme it according to the meaning and/or origin of the name. Thus, the coaster is set in a wooded, mountainous portion of rural Japan; the rocks are very dark in color deliberately, as the Japanese islands were formed by volcanic activities. I could add some different textures here and there, though, but the lighter, more white-colored rock may not fit as well with the theme as you may think. We'll just have to see, however. :wink:

chevelleROCKER
04-28-2008, 07:10 PM
In a day? That will work. :smile:

Nethero
04-28-2008, 07:22 PM
Well, "Naomi" is a Japanese name meaning "Beautiful one." I fell in love with the name, and decided to theme it according to the meaning and/or origin of the name. Thus, the coaster is set in a wooded, mountainous portion of rural Japan; the rocks are very dark in color deliberately, as the Japanese islands were formed by volcanic activities. I could add some different textures here and there, though, but the lighter, more white-colored rock may not fit as well with the theme as you may think. We'll just have to see, however. :wink:


Oh, well that makes sence. You should use the asphault terrain at the bottom then.

Fbh007
04-28-2008, 10:28 PM
*laughs* You're confusing me now. Hah, anyway, thank you. :smile:


Never Mind Baka :wink:
Can't wait for more :smile:

Bakaneko93
04-29-2008, 04:52 PM
In a day? That will work. :smile:


Indeed...


Oh, well that makes sence. You should use the asphault terrain at the bottom then.


As per your suggestion, the terrain textures on the mountains has been diversified. :wink:


Never Mind Baka :wink:
Can't wait for more :smile:


If you insist... :confused:
:wink:

--------Update-

Goodness, I'm actually on schedule for an update?! That's rather surprising! The weather today is very dull and dreary, though, and I do believe that I've caught something during the temperature shift. So, like last time, I may not say too much during the update; besides, pictures are worth a thousand words, right? :tongue:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-11.jpg

Dive loop number one...

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-12.jpg

Dive loop number two... :wink:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-15.jpg

Overlooking the tower and overbank...

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-13.jpg

The brake hill...

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-14.jpg

The helix, because I just cannot get enough of it... :wink:

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-16.jpg

And for our closing picture, a semi-overview. :tongue:

Fbh007
04-29-2008, 06:13 PM
Wow! No constructive critism :P

deathfearsnone
04-29-2008, 06:15 PM
absolutely flawless

Adamb241
04-29-2008, 06:22 PM
Wow, thats all I can say....your pictures are amazing! Great terraforming and everything!

Ethan
04-29-2008, 06:29 PM
The supports in that first picture are really well done!

chevelleROCKER
04-29-2008, 07:26 PM
Wow! I can't believe how well the scenery is and the supports...it's amazing! :eek:

Nethero
04-29-2008, 07:59 PM
The way you constructed that dive loop looks very unique. I've never seen someone start the track out diagonally and THEN do a dive loop bringing it back to normal.

And those mountains look MUCH better now. MUCH! I don't know what to say. Don't have any useful suggestions. You could add bushes around the edges of where the rock turns into grass, but that's only if you're nit picky. Very well done.

Supernova
04-29-2008, 08:12 PM
I'm having trouble finding something to criticize, but I will ask, what do you plan to do with the large clearing in the last picture?

chevelleROCKER
04-30-2008, 06:25 PM
I never even noticed the clearing until I looked at it closer...I would suggest just adding more trees or maybe a pond or something... :smile:

ndawg426
05-04-2008, 04:33 PM
Looks good... :tongue:

Bakaneko93
05-05-2008, 07:34 PM
*cough* I'm to lazy to reply to all of you at the moment... Sorry. :paperbag:

------Update-

Most of the map is now filled with trees and shrubs, with the exemption of the very front area. I plan another water feature, a much larger pond of sorts with a small oriental house perched just over the water. I haven't any pictures of this, though, as I've just started with it. So, please allow me to give you these pictures displaying the coaster/landscape, in it's stead.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-18.jpg

The train travelling between the Zero-G-Roll and the overbanked element, as you can see, this area has been given a good deal of foliage. I was originally thinking of erecting another building there instead, but I couldn't make it satisfactory.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-19.jpg

Here we have the overbanked element, with a cross between a very small Japanese noble castle, and a lighthouse... I'm going out on a limb calling it a border-watchtower.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-20.jpg

This picture is of the train just before the final inversion... *ahem* "...Wheee!"

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd245/Bakaneko93/Naomi-21.jpg

And here we have the final shot of the day, very nice picture showing the train as it exits the final inversion. :smile:

chevelleROCKER
05-05-2008, 07:38 PM
WOW! Can't wait for the pond thing to be added...

Ethan
05-05-2008, 07:53 PM
^ Yeah, that will definitely make this coaster perfect.

Adamb241
05-05-2008, 08:19 PM
Awesome work! One question, what CS is the Asian pieces from?

Fbh007
05-05-2008, 08:33 PM
Baka,how do you want me to do constructive critism? This is coaster is perfect!

Supernova
05-05-2008, 11:03 PM
I know I know, nitpicky, but, I do see a lot of the supports running through the track on the final inversion. Other than that it's wonderful.

Zippy24
06-03-2008, 06:28 PM
Most of them are fine as long as they are not running through the pipe where the wheels run on. Looks great can't wait for a POV.